Blog #10

A choice I made when writing this essay was to include one of my own examples. I talked and explained about how spell check is making students lazier. I decided to take this approach so I could include more of my own ideas instead of taking scholars ideas. Another choice I made when revising was to take the advise of my peers and include 'the human factor'. I thought that was a great idea and found a way to incorporate it into my essay. I thought that the face to face revision really helped, I was really stuck when I first started writing my rough draft but my peers really opened my eyes to other things I could include to make my essay a lot better. I didn't really find much difference in face to face compared to blogging besides the fact that it was easier to ask my peers questions. If I wasn't sure about what a peer is saying on my blog I couldn't really ask to find an immediate response.