It took me awhile to decide what I what angle I wanted to come from with this essay. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to talk more about my response to the authors or how both authors expressed their views. I debated for awhile the two ideas and decided that both ideas weren’t too far apart so I just settled on using both suggestions.
I choose to concentrate on these two topics because I could explain them without difficulty and they were broad topics that I could write a lot about. Also, on my first assignment I wrote about these topics so I thought it would be easy to expand on them. My notes on Vincente’s text helped me a lot to expand on these thoughts. I constructed my essay by sitting down and looking over my notes and quotes that I highlighted and thought were important. I took my first essay and added more detail and quotes to expand on my thoughts and build a better understanding of the book. I added parts from the second half of the reading and talked about the conclusion. I wish I would have taken notes on “Cat’s Cradle” while I was reading it. It would have helped a lot so I didn’t have to reread chapters. It took a lot more time for me to write this paper because it would take me awhile to find passages that I wanted to include to improve my essay.
Overall, I think my essay turned out pretty decent. I’m sure many things could be made better, but in the end I put a lot of work into the paper and I’m proud of my achievements.
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